naxcap.blogg.se - Crash bandicut 3

Summarizing the content would alleviate this. There are also five consecutive sentences that start with "Boxes".Replace with something like " Boxes contain helpful items or can augment the character's mobility.".The descriptions of the different boxes seems unnecessary.Is this necessary: " Crash can increase his jumping ability by jumping after a slide."?.Here are some examples of what could trimmed: Just keep in mind that this section should not tell someone "how" the game is played, but rather "what" the game mechanics are.

The "Gameplay" sections goes into a bit too much detail, and I think some parts should be trimmed.

Prose quality: Here are the prose issues that stood out to me. I'm always happy to see the older games get some much needed attentionĪ.

Reviewer: Guyinblack25 talk 16:35, 22 November 2010 (UTC)Ī good read and very good article overall.